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Thursday, 15 March 2018

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Olivia the skater was performing to perfect by Ed Sheeran. She performed an amazing backflip that makes the audience gasp and lands perfectly and the audience shouted as loud as a alarm clock and the claps were loud like someone was banging on a hard metal door. Then it was time for everyone to leave the Rockefeller centre. Then everyone was leaving with sadness hoping that the show would never end, so everyone walked sadly to their car and hopped in their cars with tears on their faces, then they left to go home to where they lived.

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