Hello my name is Lita, And this post is about animal abusement. In writing my class (ruru) had gotten a task from the teachers. The was to right 3 reasons about if we should use animals ?, or I f we shouldn´t. Here is what I done.
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hi Lita it's me i really like the way you did all your reason and why. you also put a conclusions to finish your writing i also did that to with my class. maybe next time add more pictures and add example for it i have question for you why did you do this writing.
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ReplyDeleteAnyeong Chingu~(Hi Friend), It's me Anica. I really like the way you did your reasons and the reasons were pretty good and all had a point. I also did the same topic in writing as you. Maybe next time add more pictures and a little bit more colors.
ReplyDeleteKangsaminda(Thank you~)