hey readers,

I love making my friends and teachers laugh.
My best friend ever is sotheara.
Some things I enjoy at school is mathematics and reading.
My least favorite subject in school is writing,
and my favorite thing in the whole entire world is walking up the mountains with my family.
i really want to know who is following me so I was wondering if you could comment down below and you could tell what I could add in my work if I did a mistake.
Hi Lita my name is Evelyn and I go to HPS I can see some mistakes on our work you didn't pot in capitol letters for you i. I really like your work and I want to follow you.
ReplyDeletehi evelyn.
Deletethanks for the comment.
i really think that i should put capital Is next time
again thanks for -the comment
and i would love to follow you
-lita*/
Hi Lita I am Aroha from hornby primary school, you look really nice and You have made some mistakes in your writing, you need to Chang your I into a chapati I's and I am going to follow you. It would be helpful if you could follow me back.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment aroha,
Deletethanks for helping me for what i need to do next time on a new post.
andi would love to follow you back
- lita
Hi my name is Makenzie’O.
ReplyDeletewith the size of the words is to small and the color was to hard for me to read but I hope that you make more posts just make shuer that it is big so people can read it.You are good at explaning what you like to do. When you are not at school.
What do you think you will do next?
hi macknezie'O
Deletethanks for the comment when i read i saw that you were right
the color of the words were hard too,
what color do you think that is easy to read.
and next time i will make the writing bigger next time.
and when im not at school I would love to be a lawyer